The Death Of Innocence

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• NYAMEBA NYANSAFO 12 years ago

  THE WISEST CHOICE ANY COMPASSIONATE HUMAN BEING SHOULD MAKE WHEN GIVEN A FAIR CHANCE TO CHOOSE BETWEEN GOD AND GOOD, IS TO CHOOSE GOOD OVER GOD. GOOD IS GOOD!, AS FOR THE NAME GOD, IT IS MISSING ONE 'O', AND THAT HAS MADE IT ...
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  THE WISEST CHOICE ANY COMPASSIONATE HUMAN BEING SHOULD MAKE WHEN GIVEN A FAIR CHANCE TO CHOOSE BETWEEN GOD AND GOOD, IS TO CHOOSE GOOD OVER GOD. GOOD IS GOOD!, AS FOR THE NAME GOD, IT IS MISSING ONE 'O', AND THAT HAS MADE IT OKAY AND EASY FOR EVIL PEOPLE TO USE IT IN DOING EVIL THINGS, LIKE WAR, MASS MURDER, CONQUEST AND SLAVERY. A CLOSE STUDY OF THE PEOPLE WHOSE LANGUAGE USES THE NAME GOD REVEALS HOW WICKED AND DECEPTIVE THEY ARE. THE RELIGION THAT IS GOD DRIVEN IS A BLOODTHIRSTY DESTROYER OF HUMANITY, THE WHOLE EARTH IS IN TROUBLE BECAUSE OF IT.
  I HOPE GOOD EMERGES SOON AND OVERWHELMS GOD FOR THE SAKE FREEDOM AND JUSTICE FOR HUMANKIND.

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• Kwesi Atta Sakyi 12 years ago

  We pray for divine intervention in the affairs of humankind because humans have lost direction.

  We pray for divine intervention in the affairs of humankind because humans have lost direction.

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• Kwesi Atta Sakyi 12 years ago

  Your choice of certain words is slang. Avoid words like go nuts, gotten, kidding etc. That is poor diction in formal writing and language of the ghetto and not much schooled. Lots of misspelt words like 'would' for 'world',' ...
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  Your choice of certain words is slang. Avoid words like go nuts, gotten, kidding etc. That is poor diction in formal writing and language of the ghetto and not much schooled. Lots of misspelt words like 'would' for 'world',' piece' for 'pierce', etc. You look someone in the 'eye' not in the 'eyes'. The word is' fateful' and not 'faithful' day.

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