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• Papa Nuamah 11 years ago

  Nice piece of work. The problem is the unnecessary use of BIG WORDS! Ghanaians should learn to write as though they were writing for readers nine years and above. In America, the typical publisher would throw this piece in th ...
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  Nice piece of work. The problem is the unnecessary use of BIG WORDS! Ghanaians should learn to write as though they were writing for readers nine years and above. In America, the typical publisher would throw this piece in the trash can. The substance is so buried in big words that it defeats the purpose. Unless your target readership is only the academic elite, you are making no sense at all to the average reader on the street. Nice piece, but break it down and you would sound better that way. You don't have to prove anything.

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