Do you mean "stop the thief of time" or what? Come again!
Do you mean "stop the thief of time" or what? Come again!
Navropio 9 years ago
This is not only the prolem of the diasporans but the majority of the black man,
We like to give good excuses for everything in life, instead of facing the challenges of persistence and perseverance. Mahama should have selec ... read full comment
This is not only the prolem of the diasporans but the majority of the black man,
We like to give good excuses for everything in life, instead of facing the challenges of persistence and perseverance. Mahama should have selected this as his team for the National Economic Forum.
NEMESIS 9 years ago
Your grammar is too bad, so terrible. For your heading, you could just have said, "Stop procrastinating". You have very strong points there, but your grammar is seriously flawed. There's not a single paragraph that has no fau ... read full comment
Your grammar is too bad, so terrible. For your heading, you could just have said, "Stop procrastinating". You have very strong points there, but your grammar is seriously flawed. There's not a single paragraph that has no fault. How can you say things like: "This attitude of procrastination 'have' affected our children"(paragraph 1), instead of "... 'has' affected our children"? In the next paragraph, you have: "There are several reasons why these immigrants though have opportunity to move on in life but chooses to procrastinate". How does it sound in your ears? It should rather take this form I think: "There are several reasons why these immigrants, though have many opportunities to move on in life, choose to procrastinate". "Immigrants", a plural noun, must be followed by a singular verb, "choose". We don't say "drop from school", but "drop out of school". The "consequences" are obvious, not the "consequence" are obvious. Paragraph 2(b), "Laziness and reluctant" should be "Laziness and reluctance". In fact, I need to pull the breaks here, because I can't cope with the river of errors that meanders all the way down to the very last line.
JOE 9 years ago
It is not only immigrants who work whilst attending school, most American students do the same too. People are just plain lazy, others too don't have any vision. They see school as a disruption to making money without any tho ... read full comment
It is not only immigrants who work whilst attending school, most American students do the same too. People are just plain lazy, others too don't have any vision. They see school as a disruption to making money without any thought to their long term goals.
Do you mean "stop the thief of time" or what? Come again!
This is not only the prolem of the diasporans but the majority of the black man,
We like to give good excuses for everything in life, instead of facing the challenges of persistence and perseverance. Mahama should have selec ...
read full comment
Your grammar is too bad, so terrible. For your heading, you could just have said, "Stop procrastinating". You have very strong points there, but your grammar is seriously flawed. There's not a single paragraph that has no fau ...
read full comment
It is not only immigrants who work whilst attending school, most American students do the same too. People are just plain lazy, others too don't have any vision. They see school as a disruption to making money without any tho ...
read full comment