Right from paragraph 1-5, who knows which district you're talking about. Do not assume that your readers already know where you're reporting from. Or that, all readers know Hon Cletus Seidu and therefore should know the distr ... read full comment
Right from paragraph 1-5, who knows which district you're talking about. Do not assume that your readers already know where you're reporting from. Or that, all readers know Hon Cletus Seidu and therefore should know the district he is politically heading. You not also assume all readers know that Jirapa mentioned in your last paragraph is a district capital.,
Right from paragraph 1-5, who knows which district you're talking about. Do not assume that your readers already know where you're reporting from. Or that, all readers know Hon Cletus Seidu and therefore should know the distr ...
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